Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Music Video

MusicVideo from Jaquese Derrickson on Vimeo.

14 comments:

  1. I like how when she saw them talking she was very dark. Her face was almost like a shadow and at the went you took the same opening shot and just reversed it

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  2. I really like the effects you use in the hallway and the acting is well done. She is a very convincing stalker.

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  3. I liked the concept of the video although I think you guys could have played it out a little more. There were also quite a number of scenes that were out of focus. Good job though!

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  4. I liked the use of the white and black empty hallway, but I thought Mike should have interacted with her as his stalker a little bit more.

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  5. Did a good job, the female actor did a great job with her facial expressions. They definitely felt cold and pissed. Liked the use of blurs as well as the shakes.

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  6. I like the black and white shots that track down the hall. They have a nice mysterious quality to them. Good song choice too.

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  7. I really liked the composition of a lot of the shots. Nice work. I felt like it should have/could have went on longer though.

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  8. I really wanted to see the library scene that you guys mentioned in your pitch. But your idea of conveying the obsessed girl worked out fine. I like the song, just wish the video was longer!

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  9. the concept seemed very simple...instead of It being a person being obsessed it turned out as a girl just following the main guy around. Otherwise, the different angles were great and the video's flow matched the music.

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  10. OMG! What happened to the happy ending?
    I liked the mood you guys created. I wish you had more locations than just the hallways. Good slow motion scenes.

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  11. I like the effects on the hallway, it made it appear creepy. For the stalking part, I wish for some parts where she would have been looking around the corner or keeping her distant instead of just appearing and walking up to him. But I like how you guys made her dark, creepy to match the hallway.

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  12. The stalking is apparent, but it could have been taken up a notch with more facial expressions of the stalker. The filters and visual effects were good, but after we see that the stalker finds out he already has a girlfriend and we get a front view of her, her eyes and overall facial features look dark, which I am all for, but it was a little too noisy. Great video overall!! Very eery...

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  13. It really is obsession! Really good variety of shots and well done shots.

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  14. I really liked that slow motion shot where the guy's girl friend first appears. That slow motion and the fact you can see the girl's smile so clearly it really transmits how the more stalker like girl must have felt. Her whole world just kinds of grinds to a halt and all she can see in the other girl smiling happy. I think the starting shot was kind of strange though since it didn't quite feel like a natural meeting.

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